Like the hiss-steamed mountains to the east
Buildings stood up, shrouded in the ancient veil
Hidden from glancing minds hungry for concise design
A brazen scene full of bewildering secrets. 

Locked away in the heart of the sky
     and locked away from the camera's eye:
The buildings rose away, no visible end
     the buildings rose away in a lucrative trend. 
Vapor danced around the sides
     like a hunter draped in champion hide;
          so dull and tired, seemingly asleep
          each building stood as fortified keeps.

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