What I want to say

What I can leave for now
     or not,
          because all of my feelings
     are all
I have for you.

Just follow your heart
     I guess,
          reach for the bright side
     and never
give up on your dreams.

Watch the seasons
     go by
          and remember us,
     for me,
and do not cry.

I will cherish you
     in me
          I hope you feel it
     that I
still want you.
2 Responses to “What I want to say”
  1. I love the spacing of the stanzas. It helps with how the poem flows, and helps with the presentation of the emotions being invoked. Cheers!

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