The Distant Couple

she smelled like baby powder and alcohol
and wouldnt acknowledge my being there
her tattoos reminded me of the reason i came
she followed my path and just stare

he looked up at her eyes the same jaded ones
trying and trying begging for her words
like they would fulfill him or relieve his aimless storming head
but she said not a word and left him to the birds

What do you think? Criticisms and praise welcome.

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