Flush Sanguine Velvets

Another surreal impressionist piece:

humid droplets on skin
heavy health vitalis
exhale breathe deep
recognizing space between
sustain rhythmic space
wet smoke face
wet nice lace
wide grins test
piles life at best
caution seating for rest
worry some from lust
tilted shift at the head
dime eyes developing
blue transcending black ink
facing space from ground
thoughts tripped over thoughts
wet humid air sieving lungs
life breaths rest on air
open air warm morning air
grinning still at life in piles
abundant vitality in acid rain

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